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Friday, March 12, 2021

Natures at its worse part 2

  Natures at its worst part 2

A year has past since that terrible accident.The holiday has finally come!!!. Koda ,zowyn and I have assigned a flight to the United States of America but in our opinion USA. The day has come, we were packing equipment for the trip,our parents drove us there and we had a good time wondering around the airport. It was our flight,we hopped in the plane and took off. At first we were really excited for our second flight someplace else,I was determined for our safety cause last time was at the beach, it was like the gods didn’t agree with us flying anywhere. 

‘’STOP!!’’Koda said. ‘What's wrong? I said as I gazed in his eyes I saw he was really frightened from what came to the unknown. As I thought ‘why did Koda yell’ and then I felt something like it was wrong,as my palms started sweating and my heart started pumping. The captain warned us that a Tornado is up ahead. ‘WHAT?!’ we yelled, the tornado charged at us hold onto your groin as we zigzagged upon the sea, we squished staying put in the tornado the plane rumbled until we got through that remorseful tornado cause our captain was a specialist at flying then another 2 days have past but we made unharmed and safely to USA.


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Kyle! I'ts Koda. I liked your narrative because of the suspence you built up and the wrote a couple sentences before reveal the problem. Next tim reread before you post to find puncuation mistakes or anything that doesnt make sense.

    Kind Regards
    Koda

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