The flood that shocked me
One day in Moerewa it was shining until Bam! A storm happened no one did a thing then Boom another strike everyone was terrified Despite I was scaredest. I tried to warn my cousins but they wouldn’t listen:the funny part was my cousins were on their devices, then Pow! Another strike All the internet turned off automatically the kids were like what! I was amazed that they were listening and asking me what had happened. The storm kept going on, it started flooding almost immediately Making a humongous ocean. Aj the oldest had a hypothesis it was the most stupid idea for a 13 year old! What came out of his mouth was confusing. He said ‘if we sing outside the sun will shine; he said you should do it Kyle; and I was like no thank you!. My friends were there to hear Ajs jokes. They are funny but when he said that sentence it blew my mind 100,000 times. In my head it that idea was absolutely ridiculously idiotic. In the morning when the water had disappeared the world was normal again then all the precious kids said ‘yay! long live the internet;.
Ola Kyle its me Mahuta. I enjoyed reading about your writing about the floods. I also liked your descriptive language they were great words.But I mostly like how you would of read this because you always read with expression and I like that. Maybe you could add some photos of the floods next time that would make this even better. Other than that great blog.
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